- Good editing
- Good lip-syncing
- Good narrative
- Touch of comedy in video
- Good lighting
- Nice handheld shots
- Good use of the split-screen effect
- Good editing - always cut on the beat
- Mise en scene is good - variety of costumes and props used
- The zooming in of the girls 'hiding in the bush' was humorous
- Good use of transitions
- Shadow works well in the lip-syncing footage
- Clothes worked well with the genre
- Variety of shots
- Funny narrative
- Good locations
- Easy to understand - communications between the artists and narrative
- Good cut rate
Negatives
- Acting is not convincing
- Not cutting to the beat
- More colour needed
- Shaky/unsteady camera in some footage
- Some shots a little too long
- Lighting is a bit harsh - could be improved
- Some mistakes in lip-syncing - out of time
- Could have used dialogue at the beginning during intro
- No clear narrative
- Lighting and location for lip-sync could have been more creative
- More performance locations
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